The pictures above are of my rough draft of the Big Data paper. This demonstrates my self-review as I marked what I am saying in yellow and the use of my sources in other colors based on the source. I then marked the use of sources as a quote or a paraphrase to see the amount I used and if it is both enough sources and equal. I then added some notes on things that I need to add or change in my essay which included getting additional sources to strengthen my argument. Peer review has helped me to notice what is needed to be added or changed in order to strengthen my essay in advance. Beforehand I would have just liked my rough draft and believed nothing could be added or changed, but now I know it can always be improved.
