Peer Review #1

I felt that the peer edits were helpful. They were especially helpful in picking out the confusing lines and asking for clarity or more detail on certain things. This process was different than ones I have done in the past as we were looking for particular things in each others essays rather than just looking for grammatical errors or anything we just spot. It made correcting interesting as we focused on the big issues rather than the small ones. The comments on my essay were helpful in notifying me to reword sentences, split up my thoughts, and clarify and add detail to my essay.